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Divorce rates and family breakdowns are increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it. Write at least 250 words.

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days
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division
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the division
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 of families and
divorce
 rates are increasing day by day because of
lack
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a lack
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 of understanding and closeness. In
this
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i
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 will discuss
about
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the problems
behined
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behind
 it and offer some possible solutions to
it
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them
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. In olden
days
 they use to stay in
a
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joint families , which teach emotions,
effections
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affections
effects
 and how to mingle with
one
 other but unfortunately because of repercussions like professional and instant
life style
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lifestyle
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now a
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days
 everyone
are considerably tend
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 to be in a nuclear family. Significantly, their main reason for
divorce
 is misunderstandings, work pressure and in recent
days
, In society women are warm welcome to work
accordingly
 as men for 8 to 12 hours a day. So, lack of managing works and responsibilities at home is
also
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 main reason for quarrels. I clearly describe the solution's to avoid
divorce
 is to take advice from adults who can understand
situation
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 far better and give
a considerable advice
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considerable advice
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 and
one
 should make sure not to repeat same mistakes in their marital life, as well as
one
 should give importance to their partner feelings and making sure that he or she is maintaining only
one
 family than
maintaing
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maintaining
maintain
 two families. so, that they can lead
effectionated
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affectionate
affectionately
 life and mostly avoid issues which cause
to
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divorce
. To conclude, people themselves will have to
reliase
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release
realise
 the importance of family lifestyle and they should have indeed corporation between
one
 other at hard times and I predict that
this
 issues would not
be impact
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 on children. so, that future generations might lead a prosperous lifestyle.
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