Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People
have conflicting views regarding the bad phases of their life, like shortage
of funds or an undesirable profession . Some take it practically while others are pessimistic about the same . Correct article usage
a shortage
This
essay will discuss both the
views and will give my opinion post that.
On one Correct article usage
apply
hand
many Add a comma
,hand
people
believe that a dissatisfying job or less income is the
part of their destiny. They are not happy with their role still Correct article usage
apply
they
continue to work in Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
fear that if they quit their job, Correct article usage
apply
then
how will they pay their bills, what if they did not get employment for a while. Consequently
accept a bad situation without making an effort to improve it. There are Add a comma
,Consequently
also
such
situations that are beyond our control and cannot be improved. For example
, a serious illness or a
sudden death of Remove the article
apply
dear
one. It is important to cope with the loss or negative situation than brooding on it.
Correct article usage
a dear
On the other hand
, there are people
who are optimistic about such
situations. They consider these phases as part and parcel of their life.Moreover
they choose to take Add a comma
,Moreover
risk
in order Fix the agreement mistake
risks
achieve
their dreams.Fix the infinitive
to achieve
For instance
, nobody has to suffer a bad occupation if better options are available in the market. Of course
Add a comma
,course
this
might require new skills, acquiring new qualifications, building a resume etc but, it is worth our while. Similarly
a person suffering from Add a comma
,Similarly
a poor health conditions
can improve his health by living a healthy lifestyle, controlling his diet, doing exercise regularly. Correct the article-noun agreement
poor health conditions
a poor health condition
Hence
, the argument that all bad situations should be accepted without complaining does not hold water.
In conclusion, people
have baseless excuses in bad circumstances, but I believe that there is always a better way to improve a bad situation and change our parts to live a better future.Submitted by shailjameel2410 on
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