You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. Thank them for having you at their house for a week 2. express your gratitude for their hospitality 3. say how much you miss them

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Dear Sam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am so thankful to you to be an amazing host for me during my stay in your city. I was really worried about the stay and about travelling

new

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places but you people have made it so easy for me. I can't be grateful enough for

such

gesture

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. I really enjoyed the stay. You people were like a family in

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unknown territory. You took care of everything right from my breakfast till my dinner, I was so touched. I miss that amazing week that I spent over. I really enjoyed the

late night

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poker games, evening coffee

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the garden and

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the morning yoga classes we attended together. I missed you so much that I have started yoga classes here in my city. Once again, I want to thank you for being

such

a lovely friend and a wonderful host. I

also

want you to visit my city and allow me to host you in the same you did. Please reply as soon you find

this

letter. With love, Diana

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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