In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
In the olden days, most of the youngsters study their college studies in very important aspect in a working environment and helps in building character traits.
the
native place. Change the word
their
However
,in the present situation students have many opportunities to study in foreign countries
. In this
essay, I will outline the positives and negatives of changing trend
.
On the one hand, it will have some benefits when young people educate and learn in the native Fix the agreement mistake
trends
country
. Firstly
,through studying in own place they are familiar with cultures and traditions because most public prefer to stay in mother
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the mother
country
. For instance
, most teenagers have obtained degree
by distance learning, while working and gained Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
theoritical
and practical experience.
Correct your spelling
theoretical
Secondly
,most folks are comfortable in attending classes where they born
and brought up in a Add a missing verb
were born
country
. Moreover
,they are used of the native's range of resources that are useful for students nowadays. Such
as,
providing materials from different colleges and universities for higher studies are Remove the comma
apply
also
available domestically.
Lastly
, government and higher authorities are obtaining facilities such
as accomodation
,food and shelter, for domestic and international students. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Furthermore
,younger
generation Add an article
the younger
are
following ethical behaviour in perspective Change the verb form
is
countries
, which isAdd an article
a
On the other hand
,most folks are waiting to migrant
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migrate
other
foreign Change preposition
to other
countries
because to earn and settle down after completing of
graduation.Change preposition
apply
However
,initially
men and women face some language problems in Add a comma
,initially
english
speaking Change the capitalization
English
countries
. For instance
,aware
of Add a missing verb
being aware
new
culture, change of food habits,making new friends can help them to live in a new Add an article
a new
the new
country
. Furthermore
,youth always want to experience other than home country
education because of various opportunities they have when studying in
abroad. Change preposition
apply
Such
as,
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apply
pursueing
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pursuing
masters
degree after graduation to obtain Correct article usage
a masters
opportunity
of learning, they will prepare different competitive exams and entrance tests to get immigration of foreign Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
countries
.
In conclusion,older
generation always Correct article usage
the older
feel
that their children need to study in Change the verb form
feels
home
Correct pronoun usage
their home
country
to obtain degree
. Add an article
a degree
the degree
However
,youth prefer to travel other
international Change preposition
to other
countries
to get goodwill and status.Submitted by ar050682 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...