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Young people in the US are given graphs yearly. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you Agree with this statement?

The bar graph highlights percentile stats of individuals that daily consume fruits and vegetables in the United Kingdom over a period of seven
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. The graph overall indicates that women are the greatest consumers and Children the lowest and
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, whereas there are differences in representations at the start and trajectories followed by each group, all graphs end higher than they began. Women’s plot is significantly higher than others, debuting the period under survey with its lowest percentile of 20 but increasing steadily to reach its highest of well above 30 per cent in 2006 before dropping a bit in the final two
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. Men and Children’s plotting is similar. It is unchanged in the
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 three
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 at just over 15% for the males and 10 per cent less for the young people. The level begins to escalate for both
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 that they reach their peaks in the
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 2006 and 2007 respectively
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 27.5 over a possible 100 male and a quarter of 100 young fruit and vegetable eaters. The graph for males maintains the peak for another year before ending at approximately a percentage less, just like that of children.

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