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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same product anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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We are living in a world where success is evaluated with
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smartness. The circumstances that we face
everyday
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 makes us trust too.
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, I believe that being intelligent is just one characteristic
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 can lead to success.
This
 essay elucidates the belief on the same. On one hand,
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your smartness can make wonders.
For instance
, Abraham
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introduced us to the telephone where today we can communicate worldwide. The invention involved
lot
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 more
characteristic
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 apart from his thinking,
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 as hard work, investment and so on. Because
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success doesn’t end only with your thinking.
Moreover
, Abraham was able to succeed with the combinations of all the
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. Another example will be
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Steves Jobs, who was
normal
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 man but made lots of tremendous changes in the mobile industry which is been thrilled by many. His uniqueness on the software is entertaining, which no other mobile competitors can win among the world population. It is acceptable that intelligence should accompany other characteristics as mentioned earlier to lead ahead. Leaders or
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role models are meeting failures in life too. Being smart
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, can bring lots of ideas and innovations. We are meeting many people in our day-to-day life who have valuable thinking and motivations that can change lots of things. But there are other features that must be worked with to
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me
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 successful and reach the top
instead
 of the sky at least.
Thus
, I conclude intelligence
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 a key to open one door in a palace where the treasure is ten rooms ahead.
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