Leaders and directors in organization are normally older people.Some people think young leader would be better.Do you agree or disagree?

Modernisation and digitalisation have brought a revolution in the health industry. The median age of human beings has increased as compared to the past. In
essay, I will give my opinions about how public well-being has been benefitted by new technology and modern lifestyles. Advancements in technology have essentially helped in preventive and curative aspects of treatment. Modern equipment
as computer tomography scans and ultrasonography can diagnosis the diseases at the initial stage which
could be treated early before it changes to chronic or incurable. My brother ,
for instance
, is a doctor in India, had bought an instrument to measure serval parameters of the human body which can detect the early cause of disease. Ultimate, all these features have resulted in the improvement of strength in future. Another key factor is the influence of social media on public lifestyle. Nowadays, everyone spent most of their time on the phone and use various apps
as Facebook, Twitter and youtube. These apps prove to be beneficial because healthy channels give enough information to promote and live better longevity. To exemplify, my weight was 81kg five months back, reduce to 60 kg after following the app healthify me.
, anyone take advantage of
apps without spending money and in their comfort zone. In
way, the public will be far better in future as compared to now. in the end, I would say, New inventions have shown miraculous effect in upgrading human bod,
in future,
revolution will continue to grow because of a more new invention by research which will certainly increase the expectancy of the general population.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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