El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.
The given process illustrates what
happen
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happens
on
normal Change preposition
in
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condition
and EI Nino Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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condition
Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
at
Change preposition
in
Pacific
Correct article usage
the Pacific
Ocean
. EI Nino Use synonyms
mean
the warm Change the verb form
means
ocean
, which is impact the weather format on Use synonyms
East
and Correct article usage
the East
West
Pacific Use synonyms
Ocean
.
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Overall
, Linking Words
Pacific
Correct article usage
the Pacific
Ocean
in normal Use synonyms
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condition
is split Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
the
by cool and warm Correct article usage
apply
water
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while
Linking Words
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wind
is strong on Add an article
the wind
east
but Add an article
the east
Use synonyms
west
is weak. life live at east as nutrients are rich. Add an article
the west
Moreover
, Could and Linking Words
storm
are more in Fix the agreement mistake
storms
Use synonyms
west
but east is less. Since that, Add an article
the west
Austrian
is suffering Correct your spelling
Austria
raining
weather but Pure is sunshine.
In Replace the word
rainy
normal
Add an article
a normal
situation
, Fix the agreement mistake
situations
wind
in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
west
pacific is weak, Correct article usage
the west
whereas
the Linking Words
water
temperature is warm. Use synonyms
Weather
Correct article usage
The weather
on
that section is cloudy and storming and raining. By Change preposition
in
contract
, strong trade winds on Correct your spelling
contrast
east
pacific Correct article usage
the east
while
Linking Words
Use synonyms
water
is cool. Since that, nutrients Correct article usage
the water
on
that area are rich, which is Change preposition
in
good
Correct article usage
a good
condition
for marine life.
Comparing normal Use synonyms
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condition
and EI Nino status, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
different
is Replace the word
difference
on
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in
wind
blow level despite the direction Use synonyms
is
Wrong verb form
being
same
. Strong Correct article usage
the same
wind
on Use synonyms
Use synonyms
west
pacific Correct article usage
the west
instead
of Linking Words
east
pacific. Correct article usage
the east
Furthermore
, warm Linking Words
water
toward to east Use synonyms
to cover
the cool Change the verb form
covers
water
, Use synonyms
as a result
, nutrients Linking Words
reduced
, which Add a missing verb
are reduced
cause
less Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
ocean
life Use synonyms
while
storming and Linking Words
raining
cover Replace the word
rain
whole
pacific.Correct article usage
the whole
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