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El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.

El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.
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happen
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on
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in
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 normal
condition
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conditions
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 and EI Nino
condition
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conditions
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at
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in
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Pacific
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the Pacific
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Ocean
. EI Nino
mean
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 the warm
ocean
, which is impact the weather format on
East
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the East
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 and
West
 Pacific
Ocean
.
Overall
,
Pacific
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the Pacific
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Ocean
 in normal
condition
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conditions
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 is split
the
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apply
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by cool and warm
water
while
wind
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the wind
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 is strong on
east
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the east
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 but
west
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the west
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 is weak. life live at east as nutrients are rich.
Moreover
, Could and
storm
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storms
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 are more in
west
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the west
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 but east is less. Since that,
Austrian
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Austria
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 is suffering
raining
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rainy
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 weather but Pure is sunshine. In
normal
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a normal
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situation
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situations
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,
wind
 in
west
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the west
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 pacific is weak,
whereas
 the
water
 temperature is warm.
Weather
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The weather
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on
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in
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 that section is cloudy and storming and raining. By
contract
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contrast
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, strong trade winds on
east
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the east
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 pacific
while
water
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the water
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 is cool. Since that, nutrients
on
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in
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 that area are rich, which is
good
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a good
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condition
 for marine life. Comparing normal
condition
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conditions
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 and EI Nino status,
significant
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a significant
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different
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difference
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 is
on
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in
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wind
 blow level despite the direction
is
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being
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same
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the same
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. Strong
wind
 on
west
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the west
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 pacific
instead
 of
east
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the east
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 pacific.
Furthermore
, warm
water
 toward to east
to cover
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covers
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 the cool
water
,
as a result
, nutrients
reduced
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are reduced
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, which
cause
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causes
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 less
ocean
 life
while
 storming and
raining
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rain
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 cover
whole
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the whole
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 pacific.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words condition, ocean, west, water, wind with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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