In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jams are a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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jam is an extremely difficult problem in large cities of the world.

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essay will explore some of the causes and recommended practices to reduce the issue. There are two major causes that lead

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congestion on the increase in metropolitan areas.

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, the number of

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accounts for a high percentage. Today, companies manufacture a large number of

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and it is pretty easy for

people

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, many families own two or three

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which result in

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. Another contributing factor is the lack of public transports.

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people

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use their own

cars

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even in rush hours. The

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cause is

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system. Most of the streets in my city are narrow and few

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can pass through them simultaneously. In order to

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reduce

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, we should change our working habits.

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, the internet can now be used to connect

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. More

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could work from home and meetings can be held as video conferences.

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, workers could be given flexible timetables. Another solution would be to tax drivers.

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, workers should share their

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and travel together. More

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use public transport to the city

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, in London, there is a congestion charge.

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helps to raise money for better public transport. Public service needs to be reliable and efficient. In conclusion,

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congestion is a hot problem

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people

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throughout the world.

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society needs to actively propagate for each citizen to improve their responsibility. Because it makes every family always peaceful and happy.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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In some cities and towns all over the world, traffic jams are a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter apologize for canceling the meeting explain why you couldn't be there suggest an alternative day when you could meet

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. What extend do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What's the situation like in your country? What do yout think are the advantages and disvanatges of doing part-time job

In recent years children have been given more freedom than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and examples.