El Nino is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Nino conditions.
The given diagrams illustrate what is the impact in normal
condition
and Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
EI
Nino
condition
in the Pacific Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Ocean
. EI
Nino
means the warm ocean
, which is affect
the weather Change the verb form
affects
on
Change preposition
in
East
and Correct article usage
the East
West
Pacific Ocean
Fix the agreement mistake
Oceans
while
Austrian
and Peru
.
Overall
, the Pacific Ocean
in normal condition
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conditions
is balance
by cool and warm Change the verb form
is balanced
water
and wind blowing
Add a hyphen
wind-blowing
level
in the east and Fix the agreement mistake
levels
west
direction. EI
Nino
changing
the wind blowing level, Wrong verb form
changes
water
temperature and weather trend in Austrian
and Correct your spelling
Austria
Peru
while
nutrients are reduced to cause the number of fish decrease
.
In Fix the infinitive
to decrease
a
normal Correct article usage
apply
condition
, strong trade winds
blowing
in the east pacific to bring the cool Wrong verb form
blow
water
up while
weak winds
in the west
pacific and water
go westward. Nutrients are rich and create the
good environment for the fish and other life in Correct article usage
a
sea
. Storm clouds focus on Add an article
the sea
west
, which Correct article usage
the west
bring
the rainy day in Change the verb form
brings
Austrian
and green grow healthy. On
Change preposition
In
opposite
Correct article usage
the opposite
direction
– Fix the agreement mistake
directions
Peru
, there is enough sunshine and rich of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
ocean
life and fishes
.
Fix the agreement mistake
fish
EI
Nino
effect, which caused the blowing level change, west
winds
are stronger than east winds
, whereas
the warm water
pushed eastwards then
cool water
at the bottom. Storm clouds move to east
too Add an article
the east
then
weather
pattern changed too. Correct article usage
the weather
Austrian
is more sunshine, however
green is dead as less of
Change preposition
apply
water
. Peru
is raining
and cloudy, Replace the word
rainy
number
of fish is reduced.Change the article
the number
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words condition, ei, nino, ocean, west, austrian, peru, water, winds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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