Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

These days, an increasing number of schools emphasize
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foreign languages at an early age.
Although
this
trend has some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits On the one hand, learning a
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language
at primary school might have some disadvantages.
Firstly
, the option to start learning a new
language
early could be a waste of
children
’s time.
Instead
of focusing on other subjects
such
as math, physical or biological, they might need to spend time on foreign
language
.
Secondly
, primary students are not ready to acknowledge a new
language
in educational institutions, they cannot understand the real meaning of many aspects of
language
as they are not mature enough.
Thus
, It could be difficult to encourage
children
to learn something new
besides
their main subject.
On the other hand
, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to learn a new
language
as soon as possible. One evidence is that it is important for
children
to learn foreign languages to create more employment opportunities in the future. It means that languages are as important as math and science.
Furthermore
,
children
can enjoy learning
language
through games in
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class with their friends or classmates. Another reason is that
children
learning a new
language
besides
their mother tongue could be more active and positive than those who don’t have
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ability. It is scientifically proven that a majority of
children
studying a foreign
language
could learn quickly and adaptability in their school. Another point worth noting is that
children
could easily communicate in special cases .A good example of
this
is when
children
travel abroad with their parents, they can communicate with foreigners when they are lost or want to make a new foreign friend. In conclusion, it seems to me that the advantages of learning a new
language
at primary school are more significant than the disadvantages. I believe many schools will include a foreign
language
in their subject as a vast advantage it has to offer.
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