It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach with behaviour to children.

one important stage in a
child
's growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.
This
skill comes with time and good parenting and
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firm conviction is that
punishment
does not have much of a role to play in
this
Therefore
I had to disable the almost entirely with the giving a statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the
child
to punish a very young
child
it was wrong and foolish as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is big being punished once the age of Reason is reached
however
a
child
can be rewarded or for good behaviour and discouraged from bad
this
kind but Fame approach will achieve more than harsh
punishment
which might entail many negative consequences unintended by parents. To help a
child
learn the difference between right and wrong teachers and parents should
firstly
provide good role modelling in their own behaviour after that if sanctions are needed the
punishment
should not be
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a physical nature at that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit some other ones and outcome which may well result in the
child
is starting to bully others nor should the
punishment
be in any way cruel. Rather teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to deceive wine their young charges
such
as detention withdrawal of privileges and timeout making the
punishment
fit the crime is a useful notion that would see children being made to pick up rubbish they have dropped killing off gravity has round or apologise to someone they have hurt his ways responsibility is derelict in the
child
which leads to much better future behaviour than dolls punishments
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