Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal
Some people think that the more
countries
produce products the more income they will gain. Make
Wrong verb form
Making
a
certain electronic equipments or Correct article usage
apply
develop
natural Wrong verb form
developing
resources
sometimes become a standard of one country
achievement. However
, i
disagree with Change the capitalization
I
this
statement due to
there are many factors that have to be considered Correct word choice
because
besides
to produce
as many as possible. Change the verb form
producing
This
essay will discuss that followed by reasons and examples.
Firstly
, human resources
is
one of the main issues that have to be focused especially in developing Change the verb form
are
countries
. For example
, once a state focus in
contains new products hugely, the workforce Change preposition
on
is usually took
by experts from Change the verb form
is usually taken
foreign
Add an article
a foreign
country
and the citizens is often jobless. It is happen
in my Change the verb form
is happening
country
, Indonesia, where there are a lot of natural resources
to handle but the scientists are less common. Hence
, increasing knowledge-based of citizens the
main goal to be maintained. Add a missing verb
is the
Furthermore
, in developed
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the developed
country
rising up production
also
not always be the best idea because it have
to deal with Change the verb form
has
market
Add an article
the market
demanding
, politics and several internal issues Wrong verb form
demands
such
as taxes and people lifestyles.
Secondly
, increasing production
without any comprehensive plan will often bring unsatisfied results to the country
. For instance
, a state focus on develop
Change the verb form
developing
a certain industries
, Correct the article-noun agreement
a certain industry
certain industries
in
the other hand, there are several Change preposition
on
problems
that country
facing at that moment Correct article usage
the country
such
as education, health
system and Correct article usage
a health
Correct article usage
an over-crowded
over-crowded
population in cities. Developing industries needs a lot of money and there are other Correct your spelling
overcrowded
problems
deserve
to be given more attention. Correct pronoun usage
that deserve
As a result
, neither production
nor these problems
can be mitigated sufficiently.
To sum up, rising up production
in a certain
Correct the article-noun agreement
certain countries
a certain country
countries
are not always be appropriate goal consider to
many aspects Replace the word
too
such
as human resources
and several internal problems
faced by states. Countries
goal
should obtain solutions to overcome Fix the agreement mistake
goals
problems
in that particular countries
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