Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal

Some people think that the more
countries
produce products the more income they will gain.
Make
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a
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apply

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certain electronic equipments or
develop
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developing

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natural
resources
sometimes become a standard of one
country
achievement.
However
,
i
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I

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disagree with
this
statement
due to
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because

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there are many factors that have to be considered
besides
to produce
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producing

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as many as possible.
This
essay will discuss that followed by reasons and examples.
Firstly
, human
resources
is
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are

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one of the main issues that have to be focused especially in developing
countries
.
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, once a state focus
in
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on

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contains new products hugely, the workforce
is usually took
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is usually taken

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by experts from
foreign
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a foreign

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country
and the citizens is often jobless. It
is happen
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is happening

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in my
country
, Indonesia, where there are a lot of natural
resources
to handle but the scientists are less common.
Hence
, increasing knowledge-based of citizens
the
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is the

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main goal to be maintained.
Furthermore
, in
developed
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the developed

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country
rising up
production
also
not always be the best idea because it
have
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has

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to deal with
market
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the market

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demanding
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demands

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, politics and several internal issues
such
as taxes and people lifestyles.
Secondly
, increasing
production
without any comprehensive plan will often bring unsatisfied results to the
country
.
For instance
, a state focus on
develop
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developing

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a certain industries
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a certain industry
certain industries

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,
in
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on

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the other hand, there are several
problems
that
country
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the country

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facing at that moment
such
as education,
health
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a health

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system and
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an over-crowded

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over-crowded
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overcrowded

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population in cities. Developing industries needs a lot of money and there are other
problems
deserve
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that deserve

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to be given more attention.
As a result
, neither
production
nor these
problems
can be mitigated sufficiently. To sum up, rising up
production
in
a certain
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certain countries
a certain country

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countries
are not always be appropriate goal consider
to
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too

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many aspects
such
as human
resources
and several internal
problems
faced by states.
Countries
goal
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goals

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should obtain solutions to overcome
problems
in that particular
countries
.
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