some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own healthand diet. Others however believe that government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.

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concern for people about health and fitness. A healthy diet should be a part of our

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. Many heads take responsibility

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taking care of day-to-day diet by actually paying interest whereas the others blame the authorities to handle. There

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always two

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a coin. I elaborate

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with, here I would like to talk about the individuals who takes the

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freedom to consume whatever they want to. If we

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food, we should have enough knowledge about each

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and its effects. Harsh ingredients,

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items adversely affect our metabolism process and organs. We can reduce dependency by being informed of products we use The

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argument is that government should take care of the items. Of

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statement is trustable but it is tough for the authorities to take one brand to establish their business in the country. Many

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and

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are being done. It will

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for government to call out each and every brand to ban products or change the formulas.

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many political connections

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, to conclude, we only people have

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and wish to choose the commodities we want to consume. When we will raise our voice,

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