Some people say that young people are more influenced by their friends than parents or teachers. Agree or disagree?

Some argue that friends can affect juveniles in a more obvious way than their

parents

and teachers.

However

, I am against

this

point of view because youngsters obtain academic

knowledge

, appropriate

behaviours

and personal characteristics mostly from school and their parental home. School is the best place to widen

knowledge

and develop good behaviour patterns for adolescents. To be specific, teachers are professions at imparting academic

knowledge

and cultivating a sense of morality.

Further

, critical thinking ability developed from science subjects and creativity

forstered

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fostered

by artistic activities

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very essential for their career prospects in

this

knowledge

-based society.

Additionally

, it is

also

a

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the

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responsible

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of

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the teacher

a teacher

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teacher

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to enforce rules in order to dictate teenagers'

behaviours

and teach them

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right from wrong. Compared to professional teaching faculty, experiences that young people can learn from their peers are relatively limited.

Furthermore

,

parents

are the best role models for their children. Youths tend to imitate their

parents

'

behaviours

, way of talking and lifestyle since they spend

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time with their guardians, and

this

is

also

the reason that all

parents

should behave properly and watch their words in front of the younger generation. Teenagers are prone to learn communication skills and

art

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of dealing with problems from their

parents

, which is very important for their

adultlives

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adult lives

.

Moreover

, most people inherit very important inborn talents from their

parents

and

this

is sometimes why many musicians and artists became professional and outstanding in the

first

place.

Therefore

, unlike friends,

parents

can dramatically influence children's

behaviours

and inborn traits. In conclusion, young individuals can be substantially affected by their teachers and

parents

on academic

knowledge

, moral

princpals

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principals

principles

, daily

behaviours

and inherent talents, while the effects made by their friends are limited.