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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 preservation is becoming increasingly important in many nations. According to some
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, it would be much easier for everyone if humanity had only one
language
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. In
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 essay, we will look into some aspects of
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 preservation and explain its importance. There are more than a thousand
languages
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 that are alive today. These
languages
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 represent their unique structure, unique sounds and meanings. Every single
language
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 is a part of a unique culture that shapes
people
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 and the environment around it. It is possible to say that
language
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 is directly related to human relations, traditions, customs and even cuisine. If a
language
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 is forgotten, all these along with history and more will be forgotten with it.
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, these
languages
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 are taught by parents in small communities. New members of those communities keep the
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 alive by teaching it to their children as their parents did. Some
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 may possibly become forgotten as each person leaves the community or one less speaker for that
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.
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 why we think
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 preservation is important.
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, others believe that having a few
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 leads to a more convenient life. The disappearance of
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 was due to globalization which has forced
people
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 to communicate in an international
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. By speaking a couple of
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,
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 as English, Chinese and Spanish, you can communicate with billions of
people
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 throughout the world. Some
people
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 have an opinion that the extinction of the
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 is not a serious threat to the world because most of them that die out are minor
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. In conclusion, it seems to me that
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 commonly spoken
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 may make life more convenient, the diversity of
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 represents the world civilization and they should be passed to the
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 generation.
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Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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