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In most countries people prefer to rent rather than buying them? Write advantage and disadvantages of renting home?

#countries #people #rent #advantage #home
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 obvious that In most developing countries people, who are
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 of low income they prefer to live in
rental
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a rental
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house
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 rather than buying
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house
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 in the heart of the
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 area.
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, to live on
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always inconvenient.
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pros
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 paragraphs. To commence with,In many big cities people who work for the private and public companies they must have to live in the area of
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,the employees,who work in a private
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company
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 money for
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 of living in town
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 reason, they
rent
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house
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 living. there are many
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rental
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a rental
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house
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, they get
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ambiance
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 where they
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 a home.they do not have any concern about water
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 and gas
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 at the end of the month.
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house
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the house
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owner
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owners
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 pay
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 on behalf of
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house
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the house
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dweller
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, who live in renal houses at the end of the month
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accomplished their duties by paying
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rent
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 and all responsibilities
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 to
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house
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, There are some
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drawbacks
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.the family, who prefer to live on
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 they go through some set of rules which
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uncomforthable
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uncomfortable
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dwellers
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also
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in
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many times.
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.Dhaka, which is
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 of
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Bangladesh where a number of
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 to live in rental
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house
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houses
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 due to their low income.In
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most
of
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cases
dwellers
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 are not happy with
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the house
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owner
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.increase home
rent
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in
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every
years
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 and put
restractions
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restrictions
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house
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dwellers
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city
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force
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 to handle many drawbacks
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while
 they live in
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a rental
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house
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. To sum up, many families, who live in the
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 they are unable to buy
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. reasonably, they
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besides
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 advantages of living rental home they feel pain with many drawbacks,
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