In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
An increasing number of grown-up population in many countries carry on to reside with their
parents
even though they have attained their degrees and possess good jobs. Although
there are chances of dispute
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the dispute
children
and parents
, they will also
achieve significant benefits such
as strong support
to thier
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their
the
parents
in their oldage
and the property will be taken care Correct your spelling
old age
off
.
Nuclear families enjoy the benefit of being remaining away from disputes and disagreements between Change preposition
of
parents
and ward. but this
is difficult in Joint families wherein many a times quarrels exist as a result
of differences in opinions. For instance
, my brother-in-law lives with his parents
and they always have understanding issues and end up fighting with each other. Therefore
, quite often young adults
plan of separating from their nurturer
.
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nurturers
Conversely
, the merits of growing up and continuing to live with parents
are numerous. Firstly
, matured
people gain moral and emotional Replace the word
mature
support
from thier
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their
parents
during hardships. As young adults
sometimes face challenges in their life, it's parents
who never give up with them. For example
, my cousin was going through tough times as his Correct your spelling
girlfriend
girl-friend
was unfaithful to him, Correct your spelling
girlfriend
however
his Add the comma(s)
,however
parents
emotional Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
support
helped him to recover from the situation.
Secondly
, children
act as a
financial and moral Remove the article
apply
support
for their parents
in their old age. Moreover
many senior citizens are spending Add a comma
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thier
lives in Correct your spelling
their
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old
On the contrary
, if adults
decide to live in the same home parents
can survive a stress free
life with their family. To illustrate, in India most of the Add a hyphen
stress-free
offsprings
don't separate from Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
thier
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their
the
parents
even though they have achieved their career goals. As a
result
both Add a comma
,result
parents
and children
can live happily.
To conclude, many adults
in some nations prefer living with their parents
for varied reasons. From my perspective, the benefits of this
overshadow the drawbacks and I believe that in other countries too children
should not live their parents
alone in their oldage
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old age
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...