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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in town and cities to build more houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Planting
trees
 in unoccupied spaces is more essential rather than constructing houses or buildings.The greenery around us plays a vital role in every individual's life.In the forthcoming paragraphs, I would be explaining my point of view and give supporting reasons.
To begin
 with, generating more plants give a variety of benefits to every kind of human being.
Such
 as people travelling during the period of summers take the shelter of
trees
 to protect themselves from harmful UV rays.
Also
, flora layout habitats for many animals. Cultivating more
trees
 will save numerous creatures.
Moreover
, Planting more greenery will reduce global warming on earth. According to ,scientists tree leaves are great absorbers of carbon dioxide and dust.
In addition
,
trees
 produce oxygen which can help to reduce air pollution. It will
also
 help in decreasing various kinds of health diseases faced by every kind of age group.
However
, it is true that the growing population needs places to live. But we can't ignore the fact that people suffering from air pollution and the only solution to resolve
this
 issue is to generate more vegetation. In conclusion, cultivating more flora will improve the standard of living in towns and cities.
Besides
,
trees
 and gardens will help to keep the environment safe from natural calamities
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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