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Not enough students around the world choose to study a science subject at university. what are the reasons for this? what impact does this issue have on society?

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Choosing a
science
 subject is not very much popular for
students
 at the university level around the world.
This
 essay will examine the main causes of why graduates are not interested in selecting the
science
 stream and because of that what impact it causes on
society
. The two main reasons
students
 do not choose
science
 subjects to study are the conventional education system and expensive tuition fees.
In other words
, The traditional education system is too theoretical, so
students
 do not get the practical knowledge
that is
 required in the
science
 stream and because of that, they think as a boring subject.
Moreover
, the fees required to get admission into the
science
 subjects are more expensive. Due to
this
,
students
 from
the
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poor financial background are unable to get admission even if they are interested in
science
. On the other side, not choosing a
science
 field will impact
society
's economy and
also
 create discrimination problems. In other terms, we can say that a country may leave behind other countries in the field of
science
 as several skilled people are less in the field.
As a result
, the country has to depend upon the other country on
science
 and its related technologies. And that could cause an economic issue.
Also
,
students
 who have financial concerns are not getting admission to the university, which will lead to eliminating a large proportion of
society
, creating a discrimination problem. In conclusion, higher fees and poor education system are the reason behind
students
 not selecting the
science
 subjects and as consequences, economic and discrimination problems occur which affect the
society
.
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