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Nowadays more and more people are working from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Many companies these days offer their employees the ability to
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, a large number of them are working in their house. There are numerous pros and cons of
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 development.
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, the main benefit of following
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 trend is not having to travel to your
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 every day and wasting time and money on gas or bus tickets. Travelling to
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 every day can sometimes be exhausting,
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, because of the time needed to get to the company due to the morning and afternoon traffic jams and
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, because of the money you need to spend to drive the car
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 or to pay your bus or train ticket. Another positive aspect of working at
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 is the comfort that
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 have when they
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 at their own place.
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 gives
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 the feeling of relaxation and satisfaction because they do not have to dress up for
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, they can wear anything in what they feel comfortable. But on the other side, there are some flaws in
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 type of
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. When working from the
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one
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 usually do not socialise with their coworkers and as a
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result
one
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 can become lonely. When you are at
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 and have a break, usually
people
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 spent it with their coworkers, talking, having fun, but when
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work
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 at
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, they are alone with their lap-tops, doing the
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 with no
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 to consult, to talk or even exchange ideas, so
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 it is lonely. Another disadvantage is that working from
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 can make
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's
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 harder.
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 can be, because of the distance of the
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, technology equipment or even internet connection. All these reasons can make the
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 needed to be done much complicated. To sum up, the trend of working from
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 is increasing every day more and more.
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 type of
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 has both positive and negative sides.
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