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Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day to what extent do you agree or disagree

#psychologists #stresses #life #period #time
In order to reduce
the
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daily life stress, some
psychologist
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 suggest that individuals have to spare some
time
 daily for relaxing by being idle, liberating themselves from any activities . In my opinion, I agree with
this
 proposition, for the following reasons. The most common cause of the increasing emotional stressors seen these days is the burden of
the
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daily living duties. Waking up as early as possible in the morning,
doing
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 our best not to get late to our jobs .,
struggling
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 with the
trafffic
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traffic
 jams , and maybe
driving
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 our children to school . All of these factors are negatively impacting our mental and physical health, so
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staying away from all of these stressors ,and assigning a couple of hours
aday
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a day
 for a complete rest, will inevitably be recharging our energy,and will be providing the boost needed to continue in
this
 life and as active as we should be.
Additionaly
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Additionally
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, humans need a space of
time
 for themselves to reschedule their priorities. I have the feeling actually that we as human beings are turned out to be working as
a machines
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 and at the same
time
 we do
noyt
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not
 give ourselves
the
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enough room
of
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time
 to reschedule our priorities and to rethink
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our future. Everybody should stop for a while and take a rest , and
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a few
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 hours weekly of staying alone with ourselves look reasonable to reconsider what we are looking for in our lives. In conclusion,
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form
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psychological
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 point of view , people had to spare
few
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 hours for a
comlete
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complete
 rest away from all kinds of daily duties,
this
 will be crucial for renewing our energy and to
probvide
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provide
 us with the needed
motivatioj
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motivation
 to continue in
this
 life.
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