7. You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say – When and where did it take place? – What is your complaint? – Suggest a reasonable solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the recent booking that I have made for

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of my household items from New Delhi to Pune. I booked the services

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November 13th,2021 from New Delhi to Pune. It was well communicated that it will take no more than 5 days to transfer all the items but it has been more than a week now. After 10 days, when my consignment reached my home I started to unpack all the items. I was shocked to see my new TV with a broken screen. It costs me a fortune and I will not be able to purchase a new one in any sense. I want to make a formal complaint about

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,I read during the payment that all the articles will be insured with the market cost of articles and if any damage occurred during the transfer of articles, the company will pay 90% of the amount. I want to file a claim to get

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money. I request you to look into

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matter urgently and provide all the possible support to process the claim.

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, I have to file a complaint to the consumer forum. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Arthur Roman

Submitted by akash.rastogi007 on Sat Nov 27 2021

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