Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are encouraged to get a

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for which they are cut out, but the money-based society has made

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reason, there have been many contentions

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should become more practical and go for a well-paid

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or pursue their dreams.

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essay outlines the benefits of both choices in terms of the worker’s background.

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of all, success only comes from perseverance and endeavours in working.

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means that

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usually harvest the best fruits of their labour when they are working with great motivation: fulfilling dreams. When

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that they are working for their own sake, not only do they revel in carrying out its demands and making attempts to overcome even the most onerous task but these workers

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strive to challenge themselves to resolve convoluted problems because of their own interests in

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matters,

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, enhancing the professional competency.

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, the working efficiency increases, helping to meet all the goals within time leading to more senses of accomplishment and simultaneously boost our confidence in other aspects

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as in personal affairs, social relationships which facilitate our career prospect. To sum up, having an enjoyable

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will help workers to reach their full potential, leading to more opportunities to become

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. Admittedly, an enjoyable

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is promising, but it doesn’t concomitant with the fact that working for a good income will result in a bad outcome. A high salary resolves the financial

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—our biggest concerns for basic need life—and other issues, including status anxiety. Given that doing an undesirable

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is stressful and the working environment is competitive, the workers stand a big chance of climbing higher in the

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ladder so long as their tasks are carried out properly. For

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reason,

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only have to intensely tackle

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the workloads in the office, leaving them behind when we head home, and receiving the high wages as

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compensation. After all, it is our family that matters, so we can enjoy all the conveniences it provides with them.

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, a good source of income is the key to upward social mobility and a

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better material living standards. To conclude, I believe the motivation is the only difference between the two choices and so long as not letting them interfere with our personal affairs, an enjoyable or well-paid jobs both lead to a better life as long as

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are hard-working and making efforts.