Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The way we shop in the past few decades has changed dramatically due to the environmental impact of online shopping. Department stores, traditional shops and high street were used to buy our goods. Online buying
is increase
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among the
customers
, where they can order whatever they want directly to their door with the click of a mouse.
One
in seven sales are now made online, at the suggestion of studies, global online retail will reach an enormous US 4.8 trillion. The trend towards shopping online is predicted to continue as
companies
race to improve their internet shopping experience. But what is the impact of all
this
online shopping on the environment? Shopping online might be thought of as greener than in-
store
shopping. After all, an online
store
doesn't require
customers
to drive anywhere and it does not use the electricity that a traditional
store
might use. You would think the
carbon
savings must be significant because items are often delivered to several homes at once. Take the typical home delivery round in the UK, producing 20 kilograms of CO2 in total, supermarket drivers often do 120 deliveries on an 80-kilometre round.
One
household would generate 24 times more CO2 with
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drive to the
store
and back.
However
, the reality is slightly more complex than that. The driver has to make a
second
or
third
attempt to deliver the purchase because many home deliveries fail the
first
time. The
carbon
footprint increase by
customers
who choose speedy delivery or those who buy single items from different places. In case of a
return
of the item
carbon
footprint
also
goes up.
One
in three online purchases
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returned as a study in Germany shows. In the USA merchandise worth nearly US$326 million
return
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according to another study. Lead to 13 tonnes of CO2 being released two billion kilograms of
this
ends up in
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a landfill
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landfill
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landfills
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.
One
product that has high
return
rates is clothing.
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Shopper
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cannot try things on before buying
unlike
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a walk-in
store
. To make it easier for shoppers to purchase the same item of clothing in different sizes and colours
companies
offer free returns.
Customers
try them at home, keep
one
and
return
the rest of them.
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clothes are not always cleaned and put back for sale when they
return
. To simply throw away the returned items is found cheaper by many
companies
than to pay someone to sort the damaged goods from the unwanted ones. In these cases, the returned clothes, which might be in perfect condition, end up in landfills or burnt. We realise that online shopping is not necessarily as green as people might think when we take all these factors into consideration. For
companies
and for the environment that
last
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kilometre to your door is costly. There is some positive news, as various online retailers are starting to lower their
carbon
footprint by investing in electric delivery vehicles.
However
, the question of how to deal with returns efficiently and without waste is a challenge that many
companies
have not wanted to face. As campaign groups demand urgent action in the face of the climate and ecological emergency and shoppers online become more aware of what
companies
do, there is increasing pressure for
companies
to take responsibility for the environmental impact of their activities.
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  • cultural literacy
  • critical thinking
  • intellectual growth
  • preservation of culture
  • problem-solving skills
  • ethical reasoning
  • market unpredictability
  • innovation
  • holistic education
  • globalized world
  • historical contexts
  • multicultural environments
  • public service
  • media and arts management
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