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The way we shop in the past few decades has changed dramatically due to the environmental impact of online shopping. Department stores, traditional shops and high street were used to buy our goods. Online buying
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One
in seven sales are now made online, at the suggestion of studies, global online retail will reach an enormous US 4.8 trillion. The trend towards shopping online is predicted to continue as Use synonyms
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savings must be significant because items are often delivered to several homes at once. Take the typical home delivery round in the UK, producing 20 kilograms of CO2 in total, supermarket drivers often do 120 deliveries on an 80-kilometre round. Use synonyms
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companies
than to pay someone to sort the damaged goods from the unwanted ones. In these cases, the returned clothes, which might be in perfect condition, end up in landfills or burnt. We realise that online shopping is not necessarily as green as people might think when we take all these factors into consideration. For Use synonyms
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kilometre to your door is costly. There is some positive news, as various online retailers are starting to lower their Change the article
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carbon
footprint by investing in electric delivery vehicles. Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion