You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasions, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter -give details of your visit to the restaurant -explain the reason for the celebration -say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding the excellent services provided by your restaurant during our visit

last

Monday. My name is Mark Will and I am a frequent visitor at your restaurant. I, along with my friends, visited the place on November 10th evening for dinner. It was my friend's 30th birthday and everyone wanted to try out different cuisine in the nearby area. It was an amazing experience as all my friends were appreciating the quality of the food. I must admit that the food was mouth-watering and the services were up to the mark.

Additionally

, the chorus of the birthday song by your staff was a feast for the eyes. Even the cake, shaped in numeric 30 with a message as 'Welcome to club 30' was heartening to see. Impressed with your hospitality, I would definitely recommend your restaurant to my friends and my loved ones to celebrate their special day at

this

place. Thank you once again for

such

a wonderful experience. Yours faithfully, Mark Will

Submitted by akash.rastogi007 on Sun Nov 28 2021

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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