In many countries, children are getting fatter and less fit day by day. Why is it so and suggest solution.

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The diagram demonstrates the process of recycling plastic
bottles
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, there are several steps involved in making them reusable and I’m going to explain all
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process in detail now. Before I start it, s important to mention here that it, s every citizen’s duty to through the used
bottles
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in the garbage bin and not on the streets, roads or any other public place.
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, all the garbage is collected from the garbage bins by using specialized vehicles and brought to the recycling centre to segregate. In the sorting centre, the
bottles
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get separated from the other stuff and
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sent to be compressed in the form of blocks. These blocks are sent to the crushing machine which pierced them into small pieces
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those pieces are washed and sent for producing pellets. Now the final heating process starts which form a raw material of it
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that raw material packed in the form of long blocks and supplied to the factories, where they use that raw plastic material in making different products like,
bottles
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clothes boxes and etc.
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