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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many schools require young students to learn
foreign
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language
. Some people believe that it is beneficial to them, while
this
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children
 should not be forced to learn
non-local
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the non-local
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language
. The reasons are two-fold. The main reason is that it may cause stress to
children
. Learning
language
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 is not an easy job, some of them are not able to learn due to different reasons,
for instance
, they have some learning disabilities. If they are forced to learn a
second
language
 at school, they will feel
stressful
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 and anxious as they do not understand and cannot handle it. When they have to do some exercises or quizzes, they may receive
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 by teachers, they will have a sense of inferiority as they feel like they are stupid compare to other classmates.
Therefore
, they will have
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low self-esteem and may lead to some mental problems. Another reason is that
children
 may not be interested in it. Many of them think that learning a new
language
 is boring and they are unwilling to
study
. If schools force them to learn, students may have a loss of interest in that
language
 along with the other
language
 subjects.
This
 will cause a serious distraction while having lessons, they will not have
motivation
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 to learn and will not pay any hard work to
study
.
As a result
,
children
 cannot
study
 foreign
language
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 effectively. To conclude, forcing students to
study
 a
second
language
 is not beneficial to them as they may not be interested and will feel stress while studying.
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