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Greeting, it is my great pleasure to write to you about my interest in the
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position
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in Hazard forecasting and compound flooding in the Department of Civil and Environmental Engineering at the
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of Alabama. I would like to be considered for the
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as my
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interests and experiences completely fitted with the needed criteria and competencies for
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project. After acceptance in the general academic entrance examination, I started my hydraulic academic studies, Bachelor’s degree, in the Shahid Chamran
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of Ahvaz, the Hydraulic scientific
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of Iran. I majored in
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engineering entailing a syllabus including
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courses as fluid mechanics hydraulics, hydrology, and
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conveyance structure, hydraulics of flood, sediment transport, and design of irrigation systems. After completing my B.Sc., I engaged in an M.Sc. in
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conveyance structure at Tehran
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, the most important
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of Iran. I
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and gained experiences with specialized software including Flow3D,
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Gems, and GIS. When the theoretical courses finished, I started my thesis under the supervision of Professor Alireza Vatankhah;
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, it had in the lab procedures and experimentation including ‘The Study of Simple Throat less Flume’. As soon as I graduated from
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, I sought job opportunities and managed to get an occupation at school, where I held different responsibilities for nine months. After that, I got a
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in a company (Forouzandeh Construction) which was related to my major at
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to gain experience and become familiar with others’ ideas;
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, I carved for putting my ideas into practice and did not want to confine myself to the theoretical
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which I had attained at
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. I was able to improve my digital
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and skills including AUTOCAD, HEC-RAC, SPSS, Python, and Open Foam. With respect to the environment, educational backgrounds, the course presented, and the
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. Getting
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is the most immediate priority I have determined for my educational career. I am well informed that the
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’s
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science and hydrology engineering programs are in line with my career-related desires and the professional goals I have set in my life. To me,
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will provide me exceptional chance to
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educational advances, international academic experiences, develop awareness, and aid finance in society. Taking
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job is a significant breakthrough towards a successful future in the applications of hydrology. I am an ambitious, hard-working student who is interested in learning new things. I am fond of different aspects of my field
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group match my interest and background pretty well. I am closely familiar with flood structures and the resulting damages. I have gained field experience and carried out objective observations in
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issue and to find solutions;
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is, by far, an aspiration that has led me to study hydraulic engineering. I am eager to join
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project and participate in the planned simulations and design processes, which will be a valuable experience for my future career. I believe that the mentioned experimental
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of laboratory and software programs would be a valuable asset for me during my career and
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candidate in your
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group, explore the educational goals I crave, and hone my skills to be applied to the field. Sincerely yours Narges Yarahmadi
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