Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are many
languages
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out per year. Some
in
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the side of if we get free from any
languages
, our life will be easier. Personally, I think
languages
important
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for
human
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humans
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and they are our
wealthy
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. On the one hand, lots of
languages
are unusual in
this
times
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time
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.
First
and foremost, most
of
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people
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the people
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don’t know about all
of
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languages
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the languages
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and
never
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have never
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hear about
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. By
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,this
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I mean that some countries use the same
language
and we know only about
such
as famous countries’
languages
.
Moreover
, in some republics live several nations and there are many problems to give
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in all
languages
. To illustrate, if India
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any rule, they have to translate
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to 300
languages
which make time useless.
On the other hand
, I believe that we must keep and glorify
languages
.
Initially
, some famous literacy
legacy
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legacies
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were written in different
languages
.
This
means that if we destroy a
language
, we can
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loose
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important spiritual
wealthy
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. Secondary, every country
need
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to their own
language
to express their position in the meetings of course if they don’t want to
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in
other
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language
.
For example
, I think it is not correct that you cannot use your
language
in big ceremonies
such
as BMT. In conclusion, I appreciate my
language
very hard and it is
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an honor
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honor
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for me to speak in
uzbeks
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in
countryside
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the countryside
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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