Some people say its important to keep your home and your workplace tidy , with everthing organized and in the correct place . Whats your opionion about this ?

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Maintaining your personal and professional
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neat and arranged is essential in an era with
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the pandemic
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pandemic
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.
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, sorting and placing your day to day accessories and tools which are used once in a blue moon have
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of psychological positives For every human being ,
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area is the sole
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, where we spend our time the most .
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is a pivotal task to keep the
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we live, clean and organized to have
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mentality .
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outlook will give a sense of relaxation, which will
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impact our routine work.
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, arranging your door keys and wallet in a particular spot will reduce any chaos , if we are late to
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in the morning.
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a recent study ,
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proven that
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setup of your
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will reduce misunderstanding between
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partner
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or family
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. Since
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most of the parents are under workaholic pressure and visit their
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to see it untidy force them to express their frustration on other members of the
house
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. To elaborate , child abuse is
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recorded
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in most of the housing, which has distressed arrangements of
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the household
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. Workspace is a
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place
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to meet different personalities coming from
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health
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.
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, it is
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recommended
to Keep our office accessories tidy ,
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, it will help us avoid contamination of harmful micro-organism, which can cause serious health repercussion. To illustrate
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nose is a common symptom seen in many
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infected patients in closed office
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. They may touch our belongings
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if we have left
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in
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place
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and transmit viral flu. Keeping our professional environment arranged will provide a
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positive
outlook to our peers and superiors on our work ethics. Generally, when an employee has managed his accessories well with the limited area , he tends to be
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focused and attracts more opportunities to thrive
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in the
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chain of the enterprise. Based on
above
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reason , I believe that
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placement of
equipments
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equipment
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and stationaries is crucial for
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well being of internal and external parties we interact
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In conclusion , it certain that well organized professional area and interior of our
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will have
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impact to our mental and medical status
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while exposing a good image to our closest stakeholders.
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