Some people believe that all the children in school are required to learn at least one foreign language. However, others say that those who are not talented do not have to learn. What is your opinion?

As the
world
has globally interconnected, people from all over the
world
can easily talk to each other. By learning an extra
language
, no matter where you are from, you can easily work with
the
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foreigners.
As a result
, children are widely expected to learn a
second
language
at a very young age, while others claim that it depends on the ability to adapt
new
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language
of each student.
Although
we cannot force an untalented child to learn something they are not good at, I myself believe that it is better to learn a foreign
language
as soon as possible. On the
one
hand, it is not really necessary for untalented students to learn a new
language
, especially if their mother tongue is
one
of the most popular languages around the
world
. Students who
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with their own
language
are unlikely to study any others
besides
their mother tongue.
Moreover
, some people intend to live and work within their countries, so learning an extra
language
is just a waste of time.
On the other hand
, learning at least
one
more
language
brings more benefits than harm.
First
, there is no boundary between talented children and those who are not.
Therefore
, it is difficult to point out whether
one
is talented enough to learn another
language
or not.
Second
, some
language
, especially English, is being widely used around the
world
in a great variety of areas,
such
as education, economics, and politics. Hardly can we gain new knowledge through English research,
for example
; if it is not written in our
first
language
.
Third
, children are able to quickly absorb
new
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language
, so teaching them at a young age is definitely essential. To sum up, the ability to learn
new
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language
of each child plays an instrumental role in deciding if they are suitable
to
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this
subject.
However
, I do believe
this
problem can be solved by
appropriate
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learning schedule for different students
,
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because the advantages of learning a
second
language
outweighs
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the disadvantages.
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