In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Jail has long been perceived as a

common place

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for all

kind

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of

criminals

.

Nevertheless

, some people hold the view that

criminals

should be made to do community work due to the severity level of the crime. To be honest, I agree with

this

idea to every extent and

this

essay will clarify my opinion. There are several reasons to go along with

this

idea.

First

and foremost,

to

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some perspective,

prison

may not be the ideal place for educating

the

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criminals

. The fact remains that there are many

of

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kind

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of

criminals

, ranging from murderers to drug sellers in the

prison

.

Therefore

, if less serious

criminals

are sent to jail, they’ll be

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by those negative thoughts of the serious

criminals

, leading to more and more

crimes

. Take Vietnam as an example, almost every people commit less serious

crimes

after taking a

prison

sentence, they even commit more serious

crimes

than they used to. On that platform, when being in

prison

, they may endure bullying which may affect them both mentally and physically. As an inevitable result, revenge will be planned and

crimes

will

be happened

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again. Those who object

community

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work for less serious

criminals

may agree that when they are in the perfect environment - outdoor,

the

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will escape and more

crimes

will

be appeared

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.

However

, they should reconsider that working outside can help

criminals

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with good people.

Consequently

, their morale will change in

the

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positive way. In conclusion, with all of those aforementioned reasons, taking community service should be used for

criminals

with less serious

crimes

instead

of a

prison

sentence.