Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often claimed that every jobless individual should be given a mobile phone and

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access to the

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by the government.

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is how the rate of joblessness will come to a

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state. To commence with, it is the government’s responsibility to help the population to get rid of unemployment which is the root cause of poverty. The

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priority for the

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seeker is information.

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, the

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here acts as a unique tool.

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,

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is beneficial to every underprivileged person.

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, details of

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vacancies and training schemes can be accessed within

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minutes.

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, saving a lot of money and time which would be spent on travelling to different institutes or buying newspapers. More importantly, the

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can be very useful in preparing for

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interviews. Having a

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smart phone

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along with

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access to the

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, people, nowadays, can easily work from home. So there is no need to pay the public transportation cost.

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, work is done easily without any hassle or trouble. Small tasks include driving

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, booking a hotel room for reservation, passport renewable process and many more. These are handled and dealt

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if one has the dedication and commitment to work.

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, it’s going to cost whole another level of expense for government to give phones to every single person. For an instance,

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like India, with nearly 1.4 billion people, and

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unemployment rate will cost huge.

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, no one will want to go or do physical activities in case of getting the sources for free. Excuses are the only responses made by them. Another concern is the selection of employees by providing them with

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job

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jobs

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. So that each and every citizen will be given

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a job

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job based

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on credentials and academic

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. CVs, resumes and portfolios are the common proof of examples to get

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a promotion

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. To conclude, I would like to suggest that rather than using public money on buying phones, the government must use that money to make factories or

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programs for non-working people of the country.