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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following diagrams illustrate the cycle of
life
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 of a species of
a
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huge fish named the
salmon
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.
It is clear that
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 there are 3 main stages in
this
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process
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 beginning with its
life
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 as
eggs
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 and ending with the action of adult
salmon
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 laying
eggs
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. Before the
process
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,
salmon
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 begin
its
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their
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life
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 as little
eggs
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 live hidden among the reeds in the upper
slow moving
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 river.
Then
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, after 5 to 6 months, these
eggs
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 will be hatched into “fry”, which
arethe
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are the
 baby
salmons
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 and they will start their
process
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 of growing in three main stages. In the first stage, those tiny “fry” with the size of 3 to 8
centimeters
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 will move to the lower fast flow and stay there for approximately 4 years and
then
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 become “smolts”.
Subsequently
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, those young
salmon
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, which have grown up
with
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to
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 the size of 12 to 13
centimeters
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centimetres
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, swim back to the ocean and continue
live
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to live
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 for a period of 5 years, growing up and
become
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becoming
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 their
last
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 stage – adult
salmons
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 that are 70 to 76
centimeters
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centimetres
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 long.
Finally
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, mature
salmons
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 swim back to their birthplace in the upper river to lay
eggs
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 among the reeds, starting a new
life
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 cycle
of
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for
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salmons
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. In conclusion,
this
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 ends the description of the
process
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 of
salmons
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’
life
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 circle.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words life, salmon, process, eggs, salmons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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