The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following diagrams illustrate the cycle of

life

of a species of

a

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huge fish named the

salmon

.

It is clear that

there are 3 main stages in

this

process

beginning with its

life

as

eggs

and ending with the action of adult

salmon

laying

eggs

. Before the

process

,

salmon

begin

its

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life

as little

eggs

live hidden among the reeds in the upper

slow moving

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river.

Then

, after 5 to 6 months, these

eggs

will be hatched into “fry”, which

arethe

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are the

baby

salmons

and they will start their

process

of growing in three main stages. In the first stage, those tiny “fry” with the size of 3 to 8

centimeters

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will move to the lower fast flow and stay there for approximately 4 years and

then

become “smolts”.

Subsequently

, those young

salmon

, which have grown up

with

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the size of 12 to 13

centimeters

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centimetres

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, swim back to the ocean and continue

live

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for a period of 5 years, growing up and

become

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their

last

stage – adult

salmons

that are 70 to 76

centimeters

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long.

Finally

, mature

salmons

swim back to their birthplace in the upper river to lay

eggs

among the reeds, starting a new

life

cycle

of

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salmons

. In conclusion,

this

ends the description of the

process

of

salmons

’

life

circle.