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Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The diagram below illustrates the process of reusing
plastic
bottles
. We can see that the recycling process consists of nine different stages which have formed a circle, from rubbish to products. At the
first
 stage of recycling
plastic
bottles
, people just throw useless
plastic
bottles
 into the recyclable bin of the drop-off site, and
then
 a truck will come to gather
all recyclable
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all-recyclable
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 rubbish to the recycling centre. At the
third
 stage of the process, the workers in
recycling
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the recycling
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 centre will differentiate the truly recyclable ones from all the
plastic
bottles
 and put them into a particular box. At the following stage, the sorted
plastic
bottles
 will be compressed into blocks. After that, the compressed
plastic
bottles
 will undergo crushing by a machine and
watering
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water
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 in a tank in order to produce
plastic
 pellets with the help of a special machine. The seventh step involves heating pellets to make raw material, and eventually， the raw material will be sent to
the
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certain factories and remade to the end products.
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