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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays It is a fact that there are a lot of
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world
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however
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 every year several of the
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 disappear.A group of people believe and argue that the extinction of some
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 is not a huge problem.Since communication between people will be more effective and easier with fewer
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.In my ,essay I will explain to you the diversity of the
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languages
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 have a lot of benefits sides for the individual and the environment as well.On the one hand that out of hundreds of
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 in Earth planets that have existed few
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 die out every year.It is believed that the disappearance of more
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 in the
world
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 was due to the globalisation and westernisation of the European and American countries which have individuals to communicate in international
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 as English,Germans, French,Russian and others.Today the most important and popular
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 around the
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.It is English because almost 10 out of 10 people can speak in English
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 And individuals who started their own business can use several international
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 and has made bussinesinteraction become easier.
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 the uncountable amount of
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 that have shows perfectly of the
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 cultures. So of the
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 might only be spoken by several communities.It has an important function and many of the traditional stores and myths are written or documented in fewer
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.
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 if they die out
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 the Earth planete
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 be lost.In ,
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 I want to say.I definitely disagree with
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 statement that with only several
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 in the
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 life will be easier.I believe that Different country, cultures and nations should be their personal
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.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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