Increasing number of students are going to university instend of working after hight school. Discuss the advantagesand disadvantages for young people who do this.

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school

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a lot of pupils want to

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university

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. But there are both pros and cons to

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of

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for working. There are many

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university

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. Most pupils want

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at

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and they hard attempt

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statement. Because their future job is more important for

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after

life. The

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help for

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their

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work is very excellent.

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statement is very right. Because

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mode

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their work experience.

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, the

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types

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a lot and you choose favourite types. But the

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exam is very difficult. You should hard

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pass the exam. Turning to the other side of arguments, the majority

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think the

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is not important our life. Many people do not want

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study

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and they

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interest

the paint, music or sport. They

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study

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these fields.

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these are not difficult and you should learn individual manner. The most famous people

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and they think are not

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beneficial

. Because you know your jobs to you teach needless someone. And they believe the

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are not need

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.

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the human has enthusiasm and they

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. In conclusion, in general,

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situation has a number of

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and disadvantages. I believe that studying at a

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has many

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for your work

exlerience

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experience

and that it

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as a good benefit.