Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?

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of folk think that elder people
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much happier and
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younger mainly because they
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fit with exercise and allot much
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with their family and buddies,
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now many humankind suffer loneliness and health issues.
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is because of our social-media
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and we can overcome it by doing
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many getting-togethers
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our loved ones. and will elaborate
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briefly
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, today's hectic
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more stressful and even ,more people do less
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back from
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. Because they get to spend more of their
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surfing on the internet and try to get themselves rejuvenated
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the weekend they mostly prefer to be alone and take as much as
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next Monday.
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8 to 8 jobs on a daily basis prefer to be home,
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they have chances to meet family and friends
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of that. Even though, having
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life
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one
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can do many things to avoid loneliness and health problems
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thing I know is to make
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and meet their friends and families.
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is because if they do that they feel much
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and
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help
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them to be mentally prepared for the very next
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work
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in the USA
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every weekend they prefer to go out with their near
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and celebrate because that makes them more energetic
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than sitting at home and doing nothing. And just because of that they are much healthier than older ones who did nothing in past. In
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, the main reasons that people are facing consequences are because they prefer fun over staying at home because of their
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which
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their energy but the
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thing they should do is rather than do nothing they can
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to get
together with
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their friends and families.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Happiness
  • Health
  • Exercise
  • Spending time
  • Loneliness
  • Health problems
  • Causes
  • Solutions
  • Lifestyle
  • Priorities
  • Social interaction
  • Physical activity
  • Advancements in technology
  • Promote
  • Engaging
  • Opportunities
  • Awareness
  • Family
  • Community
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