Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
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of folk think that elder people Fix the agreement mistake
groups
were
much happier and Wrong verb form
are
healthy
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healthier
while
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than
they
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when they
are
younger mainly because they Wrong verb form
were
did stay
fit with exercise and allot much Wrong verb form
stayed
time
with their family and buddies, while
now many humankind suffer loneliness and health issues. This
is because of our social-media life
and we can overcome it by doing much get
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many getting-togethers
together with
our loved ones. and will elaborate Change preposition
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, today's hectic life
makes one
's life
more stressful and even ,more people do less work
when he
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get
work
. Because they get to spend more of their time
surfing on the internet and try to get themselves rejuvenated this
is because they want something to make their mind fresh after working. And
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Due
due to
that while
in
the weekend they mostly prefer to be alone and take as much as Change preposition
at
time
to
get fresh for Correct word choice
possible to
work
on very
next Monday. Correct article usage
the very
For example
, medical specialists who work
8 to 8 jobs on a daily basis prefer to be home, while
they have chances to meet family and friends instead
of that.
Even though, having such
a bad day to day
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day-to-day
life
one
can do many things to avoid loneliness and health problems one
thing I know is to make time
and meet their friends and families. This
is because if they do that they feel much relaxed
and Correct quantifier usage
more relaxed
also
help
them to be mentally prepared for the very next Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
day
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day's
work
. For instance
, like
in the USA Change preposition
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where
every weekend they prefer to go out with their near Rephrase
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one's
and celebrate because that makes them more energetic Change noun form
ones
rather
than sitting at home and doing nothing. And just because of that they are much healthier than older ones who did nothing in past.
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nutshell
, the main reasons that people are facing consequences are because they prefer fun over staying at home because of their Correct article usage
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work
-life
which cut
their energy but the Wrong verb form
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one
thing they should do is rather than do nothing they can do
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