You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays a plethora of issues affect youngsters at educational institutions and
one
of them is undoubtedly the
harassament
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harassment
. In my opinion, the overriding reason for
this
problem is the weaker punishment for perpetrators.
Therefore
severe discipline should be adopted so that
schools
could be liberated from these actions.
This
essay will shed light on the main causes and solutions of
schools
scoffing providing evidence to prove the arguments. The bullying problem is rooted
on
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shortfalls in
castigation
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of the authors of the action.
In other words
, the ruling powers should provide severely
prison
sentences, incarcerating and reeducating them.
For instance
,
one
who
plead
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guilty
offending
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to offending
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a school
chid
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child
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receives merely 1
years
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year
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of
the
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apply
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incarceration.
As a result
, after he comes out straightforwardly
reoffend
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re-offend
and the crime cycle continues.
Moreover
, it is the foremost motive for
non-rehabilitation
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the non-rehabilitation
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of many convicts. The possible solution for the issue is to extend the
prison
time. It means that who is found guilty
on
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this
offence rather than
one
year of
prison
incarceration, he
spend
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spends
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at least 5 years. Let us take Uganda as an example, the country well- known for
high
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the high
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rate of
harassament
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harassment
crimes at Universities
last
decade.
This
nation irradicated the issue by prolonging from 2
year
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years
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jail for these sorts of
infrigements
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infringements
infringement
to 5 years.
Hence
, the region is exempted from
schools
intimidation today.
Furthermore
, the overwhelming majority of African lands adopted the same strategy in their ruling regions. In conclusion, hall scoffing is certainly
one
of the
headaching
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headache
matters for the local leaders. Yet appropriate measures are needed to
takle
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tackle
take
it.
Therefore
, I recommend
government
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the government
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to
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rise the
prison
term so that the youngsters could perform well at
schools
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bullying
  • imbalance of power
  • empathy
  • understanding
  • media
  • social norms
  • policies
  • consequences
  • education
  • awareness
  • promote
  • kindness
  • parents
  • community
  • safe
  • supportive
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