Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some, criminals commit a
crime
due to genetic characteristics, while others disagree and state that the reasons of
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for
such
actions lay on the surface. I believe that genetics is slightly involved in criminal behavior
, and we should rely more on Change the spelling
behaviour
circumstances
of each Correct article usage
the circumstances
crime
and its offender.
To begin
with, some psychologists and ordinary people tend to think that crime
has a genetic connection and we should pay more attention to those children, whose parents were in jail or had a suspended sentence. Moreover
, some genetic illnesses may become a reason for an offence. For example
, according to the research of the Russian sociological agency, 35% of juvenile delinquents were born and raised in the
families of former criminals. Correct article usage
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Besides
, most famous maniacs like Ted Bandy or Andrey Chikatilo, soviet serial criminal, had a different mental disorders
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a different mental disorder
different mental disorders
such
as bipolar disorder or a
psychopathy.
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However
, there are tons of examples, when a criminal was born in a rich lovely family, had everything that they need, but still committed terrific homicides. As well as in families from the
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neighborhoods
or in families with repeated Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
offender
children grow up being honest and decent, and not being involved in any crimes. Fix the agreement mistake
offenders
For instance
, last
year Kirill Grechkin, a son of the Russian millionaire was accused in
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of
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traffickingCorrect your spelling
drug
,
and was assigned for 7 years. In comparison, Roman Abramovich, who is the owner of the football team and the Russian oligarch, was born and lived in jail for 5 years because both of his parents were scammers. Those examples illustrate the absence of connection between social status and determination for committing a Remove the comma
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crime
.
In conclusion, some criminals have genetic features that may push them into the world of the
criminality. Correct article usage
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Nevertheless
, I suppose that we should take into consideration external reasons over internal ones.Submitted by tatianaraysan2002 on
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