Each year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, more and more
languages
are dying out since very few
community
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communities
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speak them. Some
people
believe that without many
languages
life will be simpler and better as they do not have to learn many. I totally agree with
this
point and in
this
essay
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I will support my ideas with examples.
Firstly
, life will be simpler for
people
.
For example
, many human beings are learning many
languages
in order to become successful and
this
causes them some problems for it is not easy to learn a
language
in a month or so. If
people
do not have to learn
languages
, they will study other skills like
such
critical things which are really important for their life. What’s more, learning a
second
language
is not easy. I strongly believe that
this
makes
people
confused. What I mean by
this
is that folks have distractions while learning more than one
language
.
On the other hand
, there is an argument that I presume countries with fewer populations will disappear. If their
language
dies out, it means that their culture will disappear too. From my of view the government, as well as human beings, should do more about reserving all
languages
. While learning one’s
language
you can run into lots of information
that is
unfamiliar and learn their culture.
This
broadens your horizon. Once you have learned their custom,
this
makes you feel convenient while travelling. Having all considered,
although
plenty of
languages
are disappearing annually, I strongly believe, fewer
languages
are better for most
people
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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