Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Surprisingly, every TV
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to educate viewers due to the view of some people. Mostly, topics are predicted to be about social issues.
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I will try to present my own opinion
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the statement. Unfortunately, every person must have
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society.
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always tries to supply
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mankind
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with information.
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, according to some people,
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is not as enough as discussing global topics in all TV programmes. Whatever
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my point of view is severely opposite since of some reasons
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as mental and emotional necessities of human.
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, everyone would be bored and stressed under
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of political and social problems that occur
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TV and each kind of social media. Unlike the offered method of reporting global issues, relaxing with fancy programmes would have
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more immense impact on the people. But why is it so? If someone
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watched
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programme
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of listening to issues, he or she would be completely relaxed before solving
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every-day
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problems. While others walk around with thoughts filled with confusing topics, we would be open mind and free from thoughts
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do not have any demand in our
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. To conclude, it would be better to avoid global-overgeneralized problems in some popular channels or at least make them less stressful and annoying.
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action can help to protect our mental safety and be more productive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Influence public opinion
  • Viewer engagement
  • Desensitization
  • Social consciousness
  • Target demographics
  • Public health messaging
  • Psychological impact
  • Social narrative
  • Edutainment (educational entertainment)
  • Viewer fatigue
  • Multi-faceted approach
  • Public service broadcasting
  • Cultural impact
  • Media literacy
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