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Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Surprisingly, every TV
shows
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be tend
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 to educate viewers due to the view of some people. Mostly, topics are predicted to be about social issues.
Therefore
,
by
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this
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 I will try to present my own opinion
to
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 the statement. Unfortunately, every person must have
own
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 way
that is
 beneficial toward
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society.
Hence
,
government
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 always tries to supply
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mankind
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 with information.
However
, according to some people,
this
 is not as enough as discussing global topics in all TV programmes. Whatever
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 my point of view is severely opposite since of some reasons
such
 as mental and emotional necessities of human.
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, everyone would be bored and stressed under
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 of political and social problems that occur
in
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the
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TV and each kind of social media. Unlike the offered method of reporting global issues, relaxing with fancy programmes would have
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 more immense impact on the people. But why is it so? If someone
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 watched
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a favorite
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favorite
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 programme
instead
 of listening to issues, he or she would be completely relaxed before solving
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every-day
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 problems. While others walk around with thoughts filled with confusing topics, we would be open mind and free from thoughts
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 do not have any demand in our
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lives
life
lifes
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. To conclude, it would be better to avoid global-overgeneralized problems in some popular channels or at least make them less stressful and annoying.
In addition
,
this
 action can help to protect our mental safety and be more productive.
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