Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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hold the opposite idea, they
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belive
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the
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can bring the advantage.
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Therefor
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ahard
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of my instance, both
of
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viewpoint
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would be discussed.
In
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the one hand, A group of
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trend that they don'
t
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want the
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occur
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. The reason is that they might scare when the
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is occurring, the situation will
out
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of their control.
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, if something were changed, they might be
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losing
closed
losed
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something. I disagree with
this
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viewpoint,
for
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instance
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if we don'
t
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change
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in our
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life
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, what the meaning of our
life
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also
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a lot of
invent
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came out is that
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want to make
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change
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a change

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in their
life
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.
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human
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don'
t
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want to walk so they invent
the
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car and
bicycle
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,
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want to work more effectively so they invent
the
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machine. Those examples
is
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that
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want to make a
change
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and those
thing
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things

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are changing the world.
In
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On

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the other

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other hand
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another hand
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, some
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believe the
change
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is always
good
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thing, the reason is that they don'
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know what's the
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can bring for them, so they would
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believe the
cahnge
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is good for them. I agree
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this
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similary
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the
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can bring
vary
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thing to us.
Althgh
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, the
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might be a bad thing but it might be
the
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experience for us.
For example
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, in the
past
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people
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want to travel different to discover
the
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new things.
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they know can be death, but they still travel so they discovered the new land. In conclusion, a group of
people
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predispose
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to avoid the
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for facing the worst case. While, other
poeple
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believe the
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always is a good thing because they
thing
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think

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in the world, a lot of
thing
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had been invented because
poeple
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want to make a
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. In my insight, I
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thing
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the make a
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is important than sitting there and
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nothing better.
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, I believe the
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is always make
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is always making

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a good thing for us.

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