Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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to do the repeat thing and out of the
change
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some
people
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belive
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the
change
can bring the advantage.
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of their control.
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something. I disagree with
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if we don'
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, what the meaning of our
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came out is that
people
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in their
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human
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humans
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don'
t
want to walk so they invent
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car and
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,
people
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machine. Those examples
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that
people
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are changing the world.
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other hand
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, some
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thing, the reason is that they don'
t
know what's the
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can bring for them, so they would
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believe the
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change
is good for them. I agree
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viewpoint,
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similarly
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thing to us.
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, the
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experience for us.
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past
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people
want to travel different to discover
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new things.
Although
they know can be death, but they still travel so they discovered the new land. In conclusion, a group of
people
predispose
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to avoid the
change
for facing the worst case. While, other
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people
believe the
change
always is a good thing because they
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in the world, a lot of
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had been invented because
poeple
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people
want to make a
change
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think
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thing
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think
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the make a
change
is important than sitting there and
do
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nothing better.
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, I believe the
change
is always make
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is always making
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a good thing for us.
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