The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture represents the site of an airport now and how it will look after reconstruction
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year. Overall,
new
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site will provide more services and will be able to host more people.
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of all,
redeveloped
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area will have more services offered to customers
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as ATM, Car hire, and bag drop. ATM will be placed on the arrival side
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to the café, and car hire will be on the same side in the bottom right corner, just after the arrival doors.
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walkway
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the walkway
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will be replaced with
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train and
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of gates will be increased from 8 to 18. Changes will
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be made on the departure side. There will be shops opened just before security
passport
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control
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, while after
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control
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there will be bag drop on the same place where Check-in is now. Check-in will be moved
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the cafes place and
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will be located in the corner just before departure doors. Security
passport
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control
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and
passport
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customs will be in the same place as now, but
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of doors for departures and arrivals will be increased.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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