Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.

It is commonly seen that products are covered with
unnecessery
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unnecessary
materials
such
as plastic. People should take into
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consideration
this
while shopping and try to pick
produckts
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products
in more
enviromental
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environmental
frendly
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friendly
packages.
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it is not that
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easy
, because there
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many factors that
unable
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buyers to do that. In
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today's
today
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world
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there
is
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houndrets
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hundreds
of different brands for each type of
products
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for example
tooth pastes
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. I believe that even though most of them are put inside
a
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plastic, there are again so many options with
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.
Furthermore
, now there
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lots of online shops from where
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can order if they do not have enough options in
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local markets. Apart from that, I have been making my daily shopping in
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the eco
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shop with sustainable ideas for 2 years
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instance, ones can only pack their things in
biodegrabeable
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biodegradable
packages or jars.
On the other hand
,
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customers
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costumers
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are not only responsible for taking care of our planet. It is widely known that what had been made can not be removed.
As a
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companies should think about
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negative factors which
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from poorly used methods.
In addition
, people get annoyed when they see
unnecessery
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unnecessary
covers which makes them not want to buy
this
anymore and that
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sure not what sellers want. As far as I am concerned, people need to
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more aware of what they are
buiyng
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buying
and how
this
affects the environment.
On the other
hand
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companies should now focus how to make
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product
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which
are
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not
harmfull
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harmful
for our planet and would be easy to
acess
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access
in even small and poor countries where there is no easy internet
acess
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access
. There has to be for sure found a balance between two sides.
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