Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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123 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

road safety
traffic fatalities
risk perception
graduated licensing
enforceable legislation
statistical correlation
demographic analysis
adolescent development
age discrimination
public transportation
driving prohibition
legal restrictions
vehicular accidents
rash driving
defensive driving

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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

A few people debate that technological inventions like cellphone are making people socially less interactive. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Too much emphasis is put on going to university for academic studies. We should encourage people to have vocational education since there are not enough qualified businessmen, electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.  What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In today's digital world, most of people have their own mobile phone. Despite the concern about smartphone addiction among young people, the benefits of owning a smartphone outweigh the the drawbacks.