write an essay presenting the pros and cons of online education

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Did you know that in some countries, schools used technologies for learning five years ago? Without a
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technology play a major role in our lives, but online learning is a controversial topic. There are a number of advantages to
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way of studying.
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with, students do not be so tired.
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, when they can study at home, they do not need to wake up too early.
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, some students do not live close to school and parents must drive them, but when children study from home parents can do
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means that they would save a lot of money
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, online learning has its drawback. To start with, it is not effective for little students from
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to fourth grade.
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, they distract easily and play games during the lessons.
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of people do not have internet access and modern technologies.
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is because salaries are low and taxes extremely high. All things considered,
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there are disadvantages to online learning , I think the benefits outweigh them. There are still a number of people who live far from school and must use buses one hour before
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lifelong education
  • continual learning
  • adapt
  • changing technologies
  • societal norms
  • cognitive function
  • cognitive decline
  • personal development
  • self-improvement
  • formal education
  • navigate
  • emphasis
  • pressure
  • contentment
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