You work at home and have a problem with a piece of quipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you my

laptop

that I purchased

last

month on 23 November 2021 has a number of problems. The problem that I faced with the

laptop

is that certain buttons on the keyboard are not function which introduces difficulty for me to type.

Besides

that, the power button

also

requires to push a few times in order to start the

laptop

. The serious problem that I found is that the charger requires a longer hour to be fully charged. For your information, I have a lot of office work that I need to complete by using the new

laptop

However

, due to the faulty, I am not able to utilize the

laptop

as usual and my paperwork submission is now behind the schedule. I am

also

unable to reply to emails and watch youtube. Based on my conversation my the technical staff, he mentioned that my

laptop

needs to return to a factory for

further

inspection.

Hence

, I require a temporary

laptop

as the duration for repair requires a few days. Yours Sincerely, John

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

182 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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