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Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? (May 2021) Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In the modern
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 there are many students who want to take
gap
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 in their
education
 after
their
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high school and pursue work in
a
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new geography. As the coin has both
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faces,
this
 situation
also
 has pros and cons. The benefit of discontinuing one’s academic career and
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pursuing
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pursing
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 a job would be that they can experience
different
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a different
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culture
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 and understand the hardships of
life
. Surviving on their own income gives an individual, independence and they will become strong as they are stepping out of their comfort zone. The drawback of taking
sometime
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some time
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 before going to pursue
further
education
 is that they would settle
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an
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older age than usual.
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 a chain reaction, everything in their
life
 would be delayed due to
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 of time they have taken to explore and work. To put the case in point , I am acquainted with a person, who discontinued his
education
 to explore the world and know new
culture
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 while working as a
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handyman
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handy man
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.
This
 experience has brought a great impact
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 his
life
 and during his
further
education
. He is now one of the successful businessmen in the Southern part of India. Another scenario where a person discontinued
from
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his
education
 to explore but the outcome was devastating.
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 time he has taken to take a gap in his
education
 turned out to be the worst decision , due to the financial problems his family has faced. In conclusion, it varies from individual to individual. One has to consider all the parameters before taking
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life
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